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REFLECTIONIn my second draft of the exploratory essay I chose to include an extreme
revision slightly different from that Mrs. Steele had suggested. This time I included a song I heard repeatedly growing up as a child. Within this draft I had a hard time figuring out how to word the song and the paragraph surrounding it to make sense within my paper. Mrs. Steele read my paper and left her own comments in the areas she thought I could improve. (copy of paper with comments located above.) I am most definitely going to take into consideration all of her comments an work really hard to improve my paper. |